This term we created a piece of creative writing about any topic we liked. I chose the story to be a little bit scary. ( SPOILERS) my favorite part is at the end. I decided to publish this piece of work because I thought it's ready to publish and I thought people would like to see some creativity. I hope you enjoy this piece of work and feel free to comment.
One morning on a dark and dreary day where the crows were croaking and the trees were rumbling. There was a small town with a big red brick house, with two members that lived in it, Mary and her Mum. However on this day Mary was all alone. Mary's Mum calls and tells her I miss you so much. Mary sent a photo of her for her Mum but when Mary looked back at the photo she noticed someone behind her....
Grandma call Grandma she lives closest to us. Mary told Mum she came over to tell me she's going on a beautiful holiday. Mary locked herself in in the closet and was as quiet as possible while mum comes home. 10 MINUTES LATER.. Sorry I might be late said mum, the traffic is major. Grab your phone and call the police. Aah! Mary’s phone started ringing. Mary picks up her phone with shaky and sweaty palms she decided to answer the phone and...
Kia ora It's Ruby, kei te pehea koe? I really like your post but there is one thing I got a bit angry with, at the end you stopped at the good part and I think you could make more but Good job.
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